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Friday, 24 August 2018

All About Me


now i will tell all about me and its called all about me my name is Arisivao call me Ari for short. What i
think is cool is white boards . I like green and pink I want to go to Samoa and  I am 8 years old and i
like bevers i love undertale. im samoan i like reading the best food are kechup spigetti  frys i have a lot of
cousins i am lazy and i sleep every day i like waching tv on netflix . i sleep again  every hour and i
sometimes sleep on the floor

7 comments:

  1. Hey Ari,
    I really like the pictures that you have chosen. Beavers are pretty cool animals. There is a cute youtube clip of a Beaver that was rescued and started making a dam in the ladies house. Pretty crazy! My top tip for you is to go back and make sure that this post had a title, otherwise it will be hard to know what it was about in the future.

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  2. thank you for telling me what to do. so i am about to go back. and call
    it all about me. so bye bye from Ari

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  3. Kia ora Ari, I really like the pictures that you have chosen as well. I love that you have included fries! Those are one of my favourite foods too! I also really love the colours pink and green! Why do you like those colours? Also, do you like Star Wars? I would suggest going back and reading through your description and adding in some fullstops. I can help you, if you would like me to? Great job Ari! I can't wait to see what you post next!

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  4. first i put the star wars thing so my sister would like it so then she can talk to me .

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  5. Hey Ari, I really liked how you have a different sense of humor and I love how you are really different to me that means you are special because you are different then others. It made me think about how I did mine and how it was completely different. Next time you could go back and add some full stops to you description because when I was reading it I was loosing my breathe. Do you really have lot's of Family members.

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